Moonlight Protocol
This sample is a contender for my second major project. I would appreciate if you read all possible stories; however, it's not required. I will be collecting data on this until Chapter 7 of my main project, God-Cursed, is released. This could be a month or more.
Feedback is greatly appreciated to help me form the next project!
Links to the other options:

Comments
Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.
This was so fun love the idea of becoming a whole person
It definitely felt like looking through the eyes of an Android at the start
This is fun! Extremely interesting, reminds me a bit of DBH
If this ends up winning I know I'm gonna love playing a non-human mc. as alive as we seem i'd love to see how us being an android tied in with everything.
it's is super rare for a IF to have a none human Mc which I do love.
NGL, you got me at that first part haha. I was so confused and thought I was getting some sort of error in the IF. Very effective, I must say!
This was such an interesting way to create your character and the drop down being an in-character thing. I am so pleased so early in this IF. This was probably the most customized character I've ever done in any IF ever and it amuses me that it was an immersive experience. I adore it. I'm just curious where it would be leading with everything. Are we some kind of spy? Some super soldier? Is the MC about to be joining a revolution of human abuse vs machines? Are we an AI injected with human memories? The override seems so particular to not be special. Goodness who knows. Benefactor is clearly very important but for what reason did they do this? So many possibilities with just that intro and I'm just ever so curious.
Whether you'll continue this or not, it was actually a very fun idea. A customized android to your liking is such a wonderful concept--turning sex robot into whatever you want! A gamer buddy? An art buddy? Someone to gossip with trends? Those choices were amusing btw hahaha. I'll put it on watch just in-case it gets updated haha!
RIP autodriver though!
The plot & cliffhanger has me hookedddd! I do understand if you don't want to do this one (from reading your end message), but if you do end up doing this one I will be VERY excited (ik i've said i would be excited for basically every sample they're just so good ;-;)
the auto driver sequence was hilarious 😭 i especially like this idea because of how unique and different it feels and how uniquely it’s done too. the way you wrote the android perceiving emotions and that part where rapid code pops up as part of the check-up was so new, i enjoyed it a lot just on account of it being different. similarly to what another commenter has said, it only gives me pause because you said it’s not enjoyable for you and i feel like that kind of thing eventually shows and also leads to unnecessary burnout which we absolutely don’t want for you of course!
edit: i also found one of the two hidden choices! hehe :)
After reading through them all twice, this is definitely the one for me. The others are amazing, and I enjoyed them quite a bit, but this one? I absolutely NEED this one.
oooo dammit so many good ones and this one of them!
I really really liked this one
The parts I liked most was the world building, it was done so well in giving small quips/ highlighting how androids of MC caliber would work in human society. (Specifically the section of it being illegal for androids to work human jobs,) and the comment about the android that jumped from the bridge, while also talking about the common fear in robot media of a takeover.
I like the potential for this one in the "human" introspection that the MC will get, and I love that despite not even hearing the benefactor initially , or knowing what they look like. We get a sense that what they allowed MC to do is in no way normal, or cost efficient. I think the MC and Amor's relationship would be so interesting and I'd totally be down to see their romance
My main concern is the ending note of " I enjoy this idea, but it doesn’t spark enough joy for me, really. " so I think out of all the stories I will move this one to the bottom of my list on which one to pursue, I want an IF author to be equally invested/having fun in their stories with the reader.
Just finished reading them all. Deep deep deep DEEP inhale.
How fuuUuUuckin' dare you drop five Absolute Bangers and expect us to choose, look into my eyes (ಠ_ಠ), ONE to be invested in. /j? perchance? /hj.
Although if I had to choose, definitely against my will, possibly while held at gunpoint, Moonlight Protocol would be my favourite. An AI gaining humanity isn't a new trope, but I think this take on it is refreshing and I'm
legit tweaking for more like rat with a biscoff under a nyc subwayexcited to see what happens next. I just know that pending existential/identity crisis is gonna HIT.The Howl is very close second though. I still hope some day each of these projects will get the TLC they deserve, cuz they're honestly all great. OK yeah you're doing SO well, thank you, author, bless