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Let me preface this by saying that I have not read (played?) Since November. Very interesting short experience. It feels almost like an autobiographical story at times. Somewhat jarring to hear the Keithian musings on gender and sexuality which pulled my out of the story somewhat. Admittedly a small problem given the short length but could be an issue in further works of a longer length. Characters are interesting which is all that is really required for a work of this length. I would love to get into the head of Osgood specifically and understand him better. Music and art are great however I feel that the main draw of this work should be the writing and story so art and music will not factor into my rating. Also big appreciate the addition of concept art with little notes for the characters (I need that bat twink BAD). Overall, this VN has good taste, good execution but nothing that makes it stand out as particularly outstanding 7/10 (will rate it 4 stars bc I appreciate Keith). I look forward to seeing more from Keith as he continues writing. Maybe eventually plans for a longer story more similar to the length of Adastra or longer?

I play this game for 2 minutes and then Oliver has the NERVE to walk in here and steal my name and THEN, steals my goddamn personality as well, GODDAMNIT!!!! very cute so far though, can't wait to be emotionally scarred for life.