Also a little survey: How long did it take you to read through the recommendations screen? Because if 2 seconds is enough I would have to make it 1 second with mega headset icons on the side.
There is definitely going to be some misunderstanding because I don't read a lot in English. At least not with a lot of slangs. My writing experience in English is limited to engineering essays (and wikipedia). I have to say it is a equally stylish comment though.
Thanks for the comment. I would take the full responsibility instead of GPT for I did all the proofreading (thrice), and I should be responsible for quality control.
I am grateful that you do appreciate the writing style, and your criticisms as well as suggestions. They are helpful, and I did not take it the mean way. I would strive to improve upon this work.
There are some things that I could not agree with you though:
1. This work is based on real life experience, to share. Plan A (which was the original script of the third part of Plan Harahar) was the love letter I used to propose last time, and post-war trauma is a serious topic in China (and also in other war-torn places if I may so imagine). So on so forth. I personally think no such things should be kept out of publicity, regardless of how they are written.
2. I am not here to side in the long-standing misunderstanding (or probably feud) between avant-gardes and others. However, avant-garde works should not be isolated from the rest. We share the same humanly creativity, only expressed in drastically different ways.
Edit: 3. I have searched KinGoliard and decided that I don't like it. I won't consider making my future works that way. Plan Harahar is a thoroughly furry work and matching it with furry CGs would be a fit. However, I would not rule out the possibility that there is a more suitable way for furry to be present.
Also edit: 4. I am baffled by the notion that there's reference in Plan Harahar, because there is little. The only reference is from Corona by Paul Celan, because that is exactly how I felt when I handed out Plan A. You won't need any understanding about Paul Celan before reading Plan Harahar. You may notice his name on the recommendations screen, grey, but I played the screen for only 2 seconds because I didn't want any reader to follow all of them. Just turn up the tune and enjoy.
(Fun thing, I am a master's student in engineering, and Arendt the postmodern poet is a student in mathematics.)
I hand-typed this. Surely, my English has gone a little rusty over the years, but at least there's no GPT between us now.
