i have a question.... will we be able to marry ro and able to get them pregnant and help them through the cycle, birth and raising the kid? I really want to live an omegaverse life :3
It's so beautiful, sensual, and deep. Everything inside trembles and feels. The emotions, pain, love, and self-awareness are so beautifully conveyed. It was incredibly interesting to feel like someone who "becoming truly real." It was very delicious. And also thank you for this rare genre! It is my favorite, so it was a special pleasure. Now I'll hope someday to see a story where the MC can be an omega. I want to experience everything from the "other side." Everyone is so afraid of being omegas, but I adore them.
Could we also get a true offline version? Not that it’s really important. But I noticed it as I was in an infinite loading loop because Catbox blocked the VPN IP. If it isn’t that much work for you.
hmmm has potential but its a bit ruined by the fact, the choices seem pointless because regardless of what you choose the MC goes on to do the opposite of said choice, but instead does what one of the other options would be--if that makes sense.
For example
-Stay quiet and study
-ask her to show you
-yes
-no
if you choose to stay quiet and study them, MC goes on to ask the doc to show them regardless.
or
Ask what you are
Ask what Lynx wants from you. Remain silent. Watch Lynx. Repeat Lynx's name again.
You choose to remain silent or repeat, it'll still go on to ask what they want from us.
Several times it says "Him" despite the fact that i choose them to be female, multiple of the choices have the exact same response, but they game is pretty good so far
Me encanto, los personajes, la historia, el como todo esta tan bien escrito y no me pierdo en ningun punto, las emociones que trasmite, toca esperar para ver mas.
Not game related. Loved the game. Love the authors other work too but I'm just reading comments and wondering who has such a problem that they are literally downvoting every comment 😭😂 like whoever it is calm down please. People can say they like something you need to maybe go see someone about that unhappiness 🤔
Bet they are gonna downvote this too since they clearly stalking the comments.
Interesting enough for me to keep an eye on, although the fact that the RO's pronouns are not reflected in the choices is a bit immersion shattering. Its simple enough to swap out the links with an if statement so I hope it will be fixed soon enough, I can provide a sugarcube macro example if needed.
My only actual textual issue would be that it doesn't feel like there is room to play a shy/uncertain character? Perhaps it is just a part of omegaverse fiction I am unused to but it feels like any shy choice is overridden by the text shortly after and my character kind of takes control of the situation in a way that I don't like. Even if the game is centered around the MC being an alpha and the RO being an omega which defines them into dominant/submissive dynamics it feels like I am lacking some freedom to have emotions outside of romantic/sexual interest in the RO, like there isn't much room to react to the situation my character is in on its own outside the context of desire.
All that said I enjoyed it a lot and I can overlook most of that because of the interesting premise.
Fascinating start, we can see how each reaction effects which way we react and how DR. Lynx reacts to us. The story so far feels quite put together and the conversations flow well.
Amazing start. I love that the mc is an alpha in such a situation – a subversion of the omegaverse trope; something I’ve been craving for over a decade. The prose is wonderfully understated and fits the tone perfectly.
There doesn’t seem to be much branching though, which is fine, but some choices flow awkwardly. Like answering yes to the question “do you know how to flirt?” and then the next page following the blurb being “You tilt your head, analyzing his request.” then asking the doctor to show you, when there was no request made. It’s a small nitpick though, just mentioning in case you missed it.
I can’t believe we’re finally getting a good omegaverse IF. Great work and hope to see more!
I enjoyed this a lot so far, the MC is very relatable and easy to blend into. The options to be hesitant/curious/shy are some of my favourites and Lynx and the Mc's interactions are a sweet dance.
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i have a question.... will we be able to marry ro and able to get them pregnant and help them through the cycle, birth and raising the kid? I really want to live an omegaverse life :3
It's so beautiful, sensual, and deep. Everything inside trembles and feels. The emotions, pain, love, and self-awareness are so beautifully conveyed. It was incredibly interesting to feel like someone who "becoming truly real."
It was very delicious. And also thank you for this rare genre! It is my favorite, so it was a special pleasure.
Now I'll hope someday to see a story where the MC can be an omega. I want to experience everything from the "other side." Everyone is so afraid of being omegas, but I adore them.
omg the way you WRITE!?!?!? you made me cry, congratulations 😭
"this is so boring!" i say as i walk away, suddenly tripping and thousands of copies of this game fall out my pocket
jokes aside- actually an interesting read :p
I really enjoyed this! I'm wondering if you'll be sold or rented out to an Alpha who doesn't play nicely then Dr. Oleana to the rescue
The update was amazing! This is so good, and I cannot wait to see where it goes!
Could we also get a true offline version? Not that it’s really important. But I noticed it as I was in an infinite loading loop because Catbox blocked the VPN IP. If it isn’t that much work for you.
another banger update oml i love this
hmmm has potential but its a bit ruined by the fact, the choices seem pointless because regardless of what you choose the MC goes on to do the opposite of said choice, but instead does what one of the other options would be--if that makes sense.
For example
-Stay quiet and study
-ask her to show you
-yes
-no
if you choose to stay quiet and study them, MC goes on to ask the doc to show them regardless.
or
Ask what you are
Ask what Lynx wants from you.Remain silent. Watch Lynx.
Repeat Lynx's name again.
You choose to remain silent or repeat, it'll still go on to ask what they want from us.
Several times it says "Him" despite the fact that i choose them to be female, multiple of the choices have the exact same response, but they game is pretty good so far
OMG! THIS IS AMAZING! This is exactly my type of story! I absolutely love it author! Keep working till the end!
This is amazing I'm completely hooked
Looking forward to the coming update
I'M EXCITED FOR THIS TO CONTINUE
Me encanto, los personajes, la historia, el como todo esta tan bien escrito y no me pierdo en ningun punto, las emociones que trasmite, toca esperar para ver mas.
Not game related. Loved the game. Love the authors other work too but I'm just reading comments and wondering who has such a problem that they are literally downvoting every comment 😭😂 like whoever it is calm down please. People can say they like something you need to maybe go see someone about that unhappiness 🤔
Bet they are gonna downvote this too since they clearly stalking the comments.
Whoever they are they are dedicated as fuck 😭🙏
I'm just waiting for mine to be downvoted, lol. Maybe they just really hate the omegaverse?
Or a bot, as I noticed that in some commets section on Itch.
So weird. Who would dedicate a bot to just downvoting Itch.io comments?? Lol
Interesting enough for me to keep an eye on, although the fact that the RO's pronouns are not reflected in the choices is a bit immersion shattering. Its simple enough to swap out the links with an if statement so I hope it will be fixed soon enough, I can provide a sugarcube macro example if needed.
My only actual textual issue would be that it doesn't feel like there is room to play a shy/uncertain character? Perhaps it is just a part of omegaverse fiction I am unused to but it feels like any shy choice is overridden by the text shortly after and my character kind of takes control of the situation in a way that I don't like. Even if the game is centered around the MC being an alpha and the RO being an omega which defines them into dominant/submissive dynamics it feels like I am lacking some freedom to have emotions outside of romantic/sexual interest in the RO, like there isn't much room to react to the situation my character is in on its own outside the context of desire.
All that said I enjoyed it a lot and I can overlook most of that because of the interesting premise.
Fascinating start, we can see how each reaction effects which way we react and how DR. Lynx reacts to us. The story so far feels quite put together and the conversations flow well.
Amazing start. I love that the mc is an alpha in such a situation – a subversion of the omegaverse trope; something I’ve been craving for over a decade. The prose is wonderfully understated and fits the tone perfectly.
There doesn’t seem to be much branching though, which is fine, but some choices flow awkwardly. Like answering yes to the question “do you know how to flirt?” and then the next page following the blurb being “You tilt your head, analyzing his request.” then asking the doctor to show you, when there was no request made. It’s a small nitpick though, just mentioning in case you missed it.
I can’t believe we’re finally getting a good omegaverse IF. Great work and hope to see more!
Amazing start! I cannot wait for more!
OMEGAVERSE IF!!!!!!
WE'RE GOING WORLDWIDE BOYS!!!!!
in all seriousness, wonderful story. Beautiful prose. I love Dr. Oleana already
Omg .im obssessed
this is fire
❤️👍
Wait hold on... A Omegaverse IF? In this economy? (✿☉｡☉) Heck yeah
I enjoyed this a lot so far, the MC is very relatable and easy to blend into. The options to be hesitant/curious/shy are some of my favourites and Lynx and the Mc's interactions are a sweet dance.
well damn.... that was intense 😳