The length was helpful in trying out the different options without taking too long. It was a fun text-based adventure game! It's definitely didn't understand all the different possibilities, but I would have appreciated getting more story based hints as to what I should be doing--it felt like trial and error was my only option. That's definitely no easy task to create so many possibilities and connect them all, though!

I had a good time playing and was happy to get the good ending--nice job!

Después de varios intentos pude salvar a mi familia :')

It took me a little too much time to save everyone. But I did it. : ) I really like it. Great job.

funny art style

I like the branching paths. The music is spooky in just the right way. Really great work

Interesting visual novel. I think I explored every route and only one lead me to the good ending. I think more than one good ending would have been ideal, but that's just my humble opinion. Props to you for also adding a spanish option (being native langauge, it's cool seeing someone taking the time to include it 🤝)

Amazing game, I actually Won

Great submission and really unique interpretation of the theme . Good Job 
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its the first visual novel game I’ve played and its really cool! I love your daughter created the woman art, you must be so proud!

Really nice game. I liked the story and how you can change the outcome. Music and audio suited the atmosphere really well.

I like the vibe and choice of music. It really makes you feel immerse into the story. Also, the art could have been more less vibrant. Great job!

It was really fun exploring all the different endings! The music added a dramatic touch and fit the mood perfectly.

This family was doomed it's truly a miracle they survived lol!

either way, it was fun to try to get every ending possible, great job 

Not normally my type of game, but this was good fun finding all the endings.

I liked the sound effects, very dramatic! I do think the visuals don't match the tone particularly well, but they at least give you a better idea of what's going on. Nice entry!

I loved how you can use knowledge from failed routes to help you find the correct one. Spoilers: I found out that attacking the burglars or wasting too much time will end in failure, so I used that knowledge to avoid some routes and navigate my way to victory!

The loop feels more like a 'reset' right now.

Idea itself is fun tho

It's not a bad idea, but this doesn't really stick out to me as distinct from any other visual novel, the "time-loop" aspect really isn't present within the narrative. I also don't think a robber would so quickly turn to violence, and I'm not really sure why my correct choice was the best one.