When you said v0.1, it's no joke that it's v0.1. It's really short that imo it doesn't even classified as a demo, but some sort of teaser / prototype. Plan to expand further later?

Whoa! love your game man! it's really cool! really, everything is cool but yeah I hope you can optimalize the graphics when it moves~

and I guess there is a typo, when the clerk explained the forte tutorial on Fighter's page, it says "Vanguard" but I guess it should be "fighter"?

Thanks for your works man!

Oof!  I love the style, but man, the graphics distort horribly every time anyone moves and it really gives me a headache.  Also, story is interesting but extremely hard to follow the timeline.  There's some obvious time jumps going on here, and there's no context between the scenes.  It almost feels like an RPG flow chart in video game form.  I feel like it would have been better if you just had us go to the mock battle and the demo into the first mission.  I love LMMV and GubiD, but if those graphics are going to distort like that, you may want to give strong consideration to another system.  It looks like problem is tied to the camera movement script you're using.  I suspect it wouldn't have been nearly as bad if you hadn't made the game in fullscreen.

VL Gothic font error?  Really?  To Google it is!

Great Story, love the bust animations, characters feel real. More choices would be nice.